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Title: Blood
Time: 10 minutes, 100 words
Character: Don, David
Rating: PG
Summary: Prequel to The Shirt.
Disclaimer: I do not own Numb3rs. They belong to Cheryl and Nick.
A/N: UnBetaed. All mistakes are mine.

“Ready David,” Don looked over at him. David just nodded.

They entered the office, the man to be arrested opened a desk drawer; pulled out a gun; waving it around. He was not going peacefully. A woman, his secretary, walks in. Shock on her face. She tries to run back out of the room.

Her boss starts firing, not aiming at anyone really. David gets down and fires back. Don pushes the woman down. He needs to get her out of the line of fire.

She’s safe.

Don did his job.

“Agent down, agent down.”

Don never saw the blood.


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May. 13th, 2009 04:30 pm (UTC)
Yow, This is a scary one. David's a good guy to have nearby in a crisis though!

I confess I went and reread The Shirt right after this, because I had to see what happened.

Nice work building a lot of tension into so few words. :D
May. 20th, 2009 11:56 pm (UTC)
Sorry it took me soooooo long to reply. RL sucks at times! ; )

Glad you like this one. Hope you like the others.
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