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Confusion

Title: Confusion
Pairing/Characters: Don
Rating: PG
Summary: What’s going on. Sequel to Blood.
Word Count: 100 words
Disclaimer: do not own Numb3rs. They belong to Cheryl and Nick.
A/N: UnBetaed. All mistakes are mine.



Confusion spread over him like a blanket. He had been peacefully unaware of that was going on around him, until now. Now, he had no idea what was happening, noise filled his ears, confusion, his mind. His tried to speak, nothing coherent came out. Groans, moans, nonsense sounds.

He felt a stabbing pain in his chest. Pressure like a ton of bricks. An explosion of pain. ‘What the hell is going on?’ his mind asked. He couldn’t breathe. Panic set in.

“Agent Eppes, you need to calm down. We’re almost there,” a ghostly voice said.

“Go faster! We’re losing him.”

Comments

( 9 comments — Leave a comment )
emmademarais
May. 19th, 2009 08:59 pm (UTC)
OMG! My pulse is racing! How dramatic!

Great use of the prompt too!

Wow, this series is really intense! I'm glad you're keeping it going.
digeediva
May. 20th, 2009 11:51 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it Emma.

I'm still thinking of adding the other fics.

I'll keep going as long as my muse lets me.
jlm110108
May. 19th, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
Diva, I love it! You did a great job of conveying Don's feelings and pain.

We'll get you writing a chapter fic soon.

Jo
digeediva
May. 20th, 2009 11:52 pm (UTC)
We'll see about the chapter fic dear.
melissima
May. 19th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
Wow, that was intense. Great Job!
digeediva
May. 20th, 2009 11:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I try.
loozy
May. 20th, 2009 11:02 am (UTC)
Urgh, this was intense... This was great and just sooo right on the spot with the pressure and tension...

Thanks a bunch for sharing :D
digeediva
May. 20th, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)
Wow, Thank you!
rubynye
May. 25th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
Vividly, heart-poundingly written. Meep.
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